Chuck versus The Last Wish

The Last Wish evolved from a one shot, to a complete 5th Season continuation novel with several more chapters. This is my version of what could have been. Also it will be rated M/16+.

Chapter 6

Chapter 6 – A normal day

The plane’s steady vibration hummed through the glass against Sarah’s temple, completely masking Morgan’s rhythm of snores from three rows back. She tore her eyes away from the endless ceiling of white clouds and zeroed in on Chuck.

“You owe me a story.”

Chuck’s familiar, goofy grin meant trouble. “How about a game instead? Two truths and a lie about our fake-married week in the suburbs.”

“Stakes?”

“The winner picks tomorrow’s story.”

“Deal.” She laughed, lacing her fingers with his. “You’re going to regret this, Bartowski.”

Not a chance. She crushed the first two rounds without breaking a sweat, calling out his fake chocolate box and seeing right through Casey’s tragic attempt at playing a cable technician. But then Chuck leaned forward, rubbing his hands together with comic-book villain energy.

“Round three,” he purred. “The neighbor lady flirted with me, wanted to sleep with me, and tied me up with pink furry handcuffs.”

The mental image was too much. Sarah burst out laughing, shaking her head. “The handcuffs are a lie. Pink, Chuck? Really?”

“They were real,” Chuck countered, deadpan. “The lie was that she wanted to sleep with me. It was all a cover.”

Unbelievable. Complete cheating—or pure strategy, depending on who was keeping score. By the time Chuck clapped his hands for the final round, her defenses were up. “One Fulcrum agent, zero danger, and Casey really was the cable guy.”

A trap. It had to be. “The second one’s the lie.”

“Wrong.” Chuck’s smile widened. “An entire cell, and I almost got lobotomized by a botched Fulcrum Intersect.”

The sheer absurdity broke her. Pink handcuffs, suburban terrorists, brain-melting devices… God, their life was insane. Laughter doubled her over, her forehead pressed hard against his forearm while tears pricked the corners of her eyes. “Okay… fine. You win.”

As her breathing leveled out, the noise of the cabin faded into the background. She looked at him, feeling the steady heat off his skin, and the game suddenly felt completely irrelevant. She leaned in, cupping his cheek, and pressed her lips to his—soft, deliberate, and sweet enough to pull the air right out of the room.

Chuck blinked, thoroughly derailed. “What was that for?”

“I lost,” she offered a conspiratorial smile. “Paying my debt.”

“If losing looks like that—”

“Don’t get cocky Bartowski. Tomorrow I pick two short stories.”

“Wait… I won.”

Sarah leaned her head onto his shoulder, lacing her fingers through his as a bright turquoise ocean opened up below them. “I know. Sometimes I make the rules.”

XXXXXXXXXXX

The terminal’s security camera footage played at high speed, the crowds constantly flowing in and out of the terminal like a living tide.

Then the image froze.

The operator zoomed in on a tall man and a blonde woman. A shorter, bearded man followed behind them, carrying their luggage.

“That’s them,” one of the operators said, reaching for the phone.

“They’ve arrived.”

XXXXXXXXXXX

The CIA safe house looked completely ordinary from the outside. A well-kept garden, a white picket fence, and a black BMW waiting in the driveway. The rental paperwork and keys were waiting in the glove compartment. The cover company had prepared everything.

Morgan grabbed the keys while Chuck and Sarah carried the bags inside.

Sarah automatically checked the windows and exits. By the time she finished, her eyes met Chuck’s.

A tiny nod was all it took.

The house appeared secure.

Morgan glanced back at the BMW from the doorway.

“We’re supposed to return this in one piece, right?”

Chuck smiled.

“That’s generally the idea.”

Morgan spun the keys around his finger, looking pleased.

“Then I’ll take good care of it.”

Chuck and Sarah watched him go.

The faintest smile appeared at the corner of Sarah’s mouth.

“Somehow, that doesn't make me feel better.”

XXXXXXXXXXX

Chuck wrestled with his tie in the living room mirror, losing the fight until Sarah stepped out of the bedroom. The blue evening gown caught the light—and Chuck’s breath.

“Wow, Sarah. You look…”

“Help me with the zipper?” She turned, stepping close enough for him to catch the faint scent of jasmine.

He slid the track up, his fingers lingering on the silk. In the glass, their eyes locked.

She turned, taking his tie to fix the uneven knot, smoothing his lapel with deliberate slowness. “You clean up nicely, Bartowski.”

“This whole setup feels familiar,” Chuck murmured. “Milan. The fashion show.”

A ghost of a smile touched her lips. “A long time ago?”

“Feels like yesterday. I forgot what I was going to say back then, too.”

“Does that happen often?”

“Only when you look like that.”

Her eyes softened. She brushed her fingers across his cheek before picking up her clutch. “Ready?”

Frantic footsteps clattered down the hall before Chuck could reply. Morgan burst into the doorway, drowning in a black tuxedo clearly designed for someone twice his shoulder width. He tugged at his collar, stopping dead when he saw them.

“Okay, this isn’t fair.”

Chuck snorted. “What?”

“You two look like a James Bond poster,” Morgan groaned, gesturing at his pooling sleeves. “I look like Bond’s unlucky accountant.” 

Sarah laughed softly. “You look great, Morgan.”

Chuck clapped his shoulder. “Relax, buddy. You have one job tonight: don't spill champagne on any billionaires.”

“Low bar. I can clear that.” Morgan took a breath, squaring his shoulders. “Rich people party. Act natural, Grimes.”

Chuck looked at Sarah. “That almost never works.”

Sarah laced her fingers through Chuck’s, her grip steady. “Then we stick to the classic.”

“Improvise.”

Outside, warm Bahamian air hit them, carrying the distant murmur of the ocean through the palm trees. Behind them, the sun-washed Nassau villa looked completely unremarkable—just another quiet retreat in an affluent neighborhood.

Which, of course, made it the perfect CIA safehouse. 

XXXXXXXXXXX

The black BMW wound up the driveway toward a seaside Mediterranean villa glowing with landscape lights. Soft jazz floated over open terraces where champagne-sipping guests mingled against a backdrop of floor-to-ceiling glass and dark ocean. The driveway was an auto show: Aston Martins, Bentleys, a dark blue Rolls-Royce Phantom, and a line of low-slung Italian sports cars.

Morgan let out a low whistle. “The entire Buy More parking lot isn't worth that Bentley.”

Chuck glanced at the mansion. “And I used to worry about making rent.” 

Sarah’s eyes didn't linger on the chrome. She scanned the perimeter: gate guards, roof cameras, rovers. Professional private security—expensive and lethal.

“Four are armed,” she murmured.

“Six,” Chuck corrected without turning his head. 

“The driver by the Phantom?” Sarah asked.

“Jacket hangs too stiffly on the right side.”

A rare smile touched Sarah’s lips. “Look at you.”

Morgan nervously tugged his oversized collar. “All I see is that everyone here could snap me like a twig.” 

They climbed the wide staircase toward a tall guard monitoring the entrance with a tablet. He didn't look up. “Invitations, please.”

“We don't have one,” Chuck said evenly.

“Then I’m afraid this is a private event, sir.”

“Ms. Diane Moore is expecting us. Please tell her Mr. and Ms. Carmichael are here.”

The guard’s stone face didn't break. “Sir, kindly step away. You’re holding up the line.”

Morgan leaned in. “Buddy… this is the part where we discreetly walk back to the car before I get thrown into the ocean.” 

Sarah’s gaze shifted to the left wing. Fourteen meters out, a service entrance was cycling waiters every two minutes. Beyond the fence line, thick palm cover offered an easy breach. 

“Please,” Chuck insisted, his tone perfectly calibrated to aristocratic confidence. “Just radio her.”

Sensing a scene, the guard finally unclipped his radio. “There’s a Mr. Carmichael at the entrance. Claims Ms. Moore is expecting him.”

Silence stretched. Only the rhythmic crash of waves and distant brass filled the air.

Then the radio crackled. “Let them in. Ms. Moore is waiting.”

The guard’s eyebrow flickered upward as he stepped aside. “Terrace is through the main hall, sir.”

Chuck flashed Sarah a sideways grin. “Told you.”

“Easier than breaking in,” she admitted, stepping through the grand doorway.

Morgan exhaled, smoothing his pooled lapels. “I am really starting to love this Carmichael persona.” 

XXXXXXXXXXX

The villa’s interior was pure sensory overload—white marble, crystal chandeliers, and soft jazz competing with a live string quartet. Chuck’s eyes darted through the crowd as the Intersect flared silently, identifying black-market investors, foreign diplomats, and defense contractors.

Out on the terrace, Diane Moore excused herself from a trio of older men and glided toward them in a white evening gown.

“Mr. Carmichael, Mrs. Carmichael.”

“Ms. Moore.”

“Forgive the abrupt escape,” she said, taking a sip of champagne. “Ambassadors are exhausting. That one spent twenty minutes explaining Pinot Noir.”

Morgan nodded with deep, tragic empathy. “That sounds like a very long twenty minutes.” 

“Follow me.”

A massive bodyguard escorted them down a series of corridors into a mahogany-lined study overlooking the ocean. As the guard shut the double doors behind them, Chuck glanced at the man.

“So… he’s the new Natalie?”

Moore’s composure cracked for a fraction of a second. “Natalie was irreplaceable. A lesson I learned far too late.”

Chuck winced, lowering his gaze. “Sorry.” 

Moore let the silence settle before taking a seat behind her desk. “What do you need, Carmichael?”

“Nicholas Quinn,” Chuck said. “We heard he showed up at the Blue Tide.”

“Normally, I’d turn you away—information is currency in my world.” Moore opened a drawer and slid a sleek black flash drive across the polished wood. “But you took care of Ingram. Consider my ledger balanced.”

Sarah didn't touch the drive. “And what’s your cut tonight?”

“Nothing.” Moore stood, gesturing toward the exit. “Enjoy the party. Try the Bahamian rum.” 

Once back in the main hallway, Chuck slipped the flash drive into his pocket.

“That was… surprisingly painless,” Morgan muttered.

“Too painless,” Sarah said instantly. Her posture was locked tight, her eyes already sweeping the floor for blind spots and security cameras.

Chuck watched her. “Something bothering you?”

“Everything. A woman like Moore doesn't hand over intel without an ulterior motive.”

“She’s business-minded,” Chuck argued gently. “We solved Ingram for her. Ledger closed.” 

“My spy instincts are screaming,” Sarah insisted.

Chuck touched her hand softly. “Then we’ll listen to them. We’ll verify the drive on a secure terminal. But… five minutes to look around won't kill us.”

Sarah glanced at their joined hands, the tension easing by a fraction. “Five minutes.”

Morgan’s ears perked up. “Did someone say drinks? Moore personally vouched for the rum. That’s a diplomatic invitation.”

Sarah raised an eyebrow. “Just don't try every single one.”

“Sarah… is that how little you trust me?”

Chuck and Sarah answered in perfect unison: “Yes.”

Morgan shrugged, already moving toward the bar. “Fair.” 

XXXXXXXXXXX

A few minutes later, they said their goodbyes to Diane Moore.

The warm Bahamian night greeted them outside the villa. A light breeze blew in from the ocean while luxury cars continued to arrive one after another along the driveway. The valet recognized them from a distance.

“Good evening, sir.”

A moment later, the black BMW silently pulled up in front of them. Chuck took the keys. “Thank you.”

He walked around the car and politely opened the passenger door for Sarah.

She smiled. “Such a gentleman.”

“Casey would definitely be grumbling right now.”

Sarah got in. Chuck closed the door, then slipped behind the wheel as Morgan dropped into the back seat.

“I'm not complaining, but I think every mission should end with a party like that.”

Chuck started the engine. “I'll put it in the CIA suggestion box.”

“Thanks.”

The BMW quietly rolled through the villa gates.

XXXXXXXXXXX

Palm tree shadows swept across the windshield as the BMW cruised through Nassau’s quiet backstreets.

Morgan leaned back in the rear seat. “I’m just saying… that rum cocktail was in the top three in my life.”

“Morgan…” Chuck warned.

“I’m focused! Just appreciating fine mixology.”

Sarah wasn't listening. Her eyes flicked continuously between the side mirrors and the dark intersections behind them. 

“Still thinking about Moore?” Chuck asked.

“No,” Sarah muttered, her posture rigid.

That made Chuck’s grip tighten on the wheel. Sarah rarely gave short answers unless her instincts were firing.

They turned down the quiet residential street toward the CIA safe house fifty yards ahead. Everything looked peaceful—porch light on, exact same shadows on the veranda.

Sarah sat up straight. “Chuck. Don't stop.”

Chuck didn't question her. He kept his foot steady on the gas.

As they rolled past, a blinding orange flash tore through the night. The parked car outside the safe house detonated, hurling a shockwave of shattered metal and fire into the street. 

“Chuck, go!” Sarah shouted.

Automatic gunfire erupted from the tree line. Bullets chewed up the asphalt, blowing out the driver’s side mirror and exploding through the rear windshield. Glass showered the back seat as Morgan hit the floorboards with a yelp.

Chuck slammed the accelerator. The rear tires shrieked, kicking the tail end sideways before grabbing traction and launching them forward.

Two black SUVs surged out from side streets—one riding their bumper, the other angling to block the intersection ahead.

Static buzzed in Chuck's head as the Intersect fired. Nassau's entire road network assembled behind his eyes in a microsecond—alleyways, dead ends, one-way paths, and traffic patterns flashing in real time.

Beside him, Sarah unclasped her tiny evening clutch.

Chuck glanced over. “Please tell me you're not looking for lipstick.”

Sarah pulled out a subcompact stainless-steel pistol, thumbing the safety with a crisp click. “No.” 

Chuck yanked the wheel left, a grin breaking through the adrenaline. “Good.”

XXXXXXXXXXX

Chuck countersteered hard, tires screaming for traction as the engine roared and pulled the BMW out of its skid. In the rearview mirror, the two black SUVs surged into pursuit.

“We’ve got company,” Chuck said.

“I noticed.”

Muzzle flashes strobed in the dark. A bullet slammed into the BMW’s trunk with a heavy thud; another ricocheted off a parked sedan.

Morgan pressed himself flat against the floorboards. “This is definitely not a routine traffic stop!”

Chuck dropped two gears and floored the accelerator. Static buzzed behind his eyes as the Intersect mapped the grid—narrow streets, tight corners, construction zones. He yanked the wheel right into an alley lined with open-air bars, missing the curb by inches. 

A taxi pulled out ahead. Chuck swerved, scraping past its front bumper. Behind them, the lead SUV sideswiped a parked pickup, sending metal and side mirrors flying without losing speed.

Sarah twisted in her seat, her compact pistol rock-steady. Crack. A hole appeared in the lead SUV’s windshield right at eye level. The vehicle swerved violently, but the driver held the line.

“Nice shot,” Chuck said.

“Eyes on the road!”

Flashing orange lights and concrete barriers blocked the end of the street—a dead end anchored by a massive excavator.

Morgan went pale. “Chuck… there’s nowhere to go!”

Traction, speed, arc—the Intersect calculated the turn in a millisecond. Chuck grinned. “There is.”

He slammed the brakes, pulled the handbrake, and yanked the wheel. The BMW whipped a brutal 180-degree bootleg turn in a cloud of white smoke. Before the car even settled, Chuck dropped the pedal, shooting straight back past the oncoming SUV. 

The SUV driver overcorrected trying to stop, sliding sideways into a utility pole in a shower of sparks.

Morgan exhaled a breath he’d been holding since the safehouse. “That… was insanely cool!”

Sarah’s lip twitched upward. “Focus, Chuck.”

“Working on it.”

Chuck glanced at the mirror as the second SUV pulled a U-turn. Something clicked. The Intersect analyzed their tactical behavior: no attempts to ram, no shots at the engine, no effort to disable the tires.

They weren't trying to destroy the car. They were herding them.

Chuck touched his inner jacket pocket. “Sarah… they’re not trying to kill us.”

Sarah turned to him, her eyes sharp. “Then what do they want?”

Chuck’s hand rested on the outline of the drive. “This. As long as I’m holding it, they aren't going to stop.”

XXXXXXXXXXX

Static buzzed behind Chuck's eyes as the Intersect overlaid Nassau’s road map across his vision. An escape vector lit up three blocks ahead, but they had to break line-of-sight first.

“Got it,” Chuck muttered.

“What do you see?” Sarah asked.

“A shortcut. Hold on.” 

Chuck dropped two gears and threw the BMW into a sharp left without hitting the brakes. The back end broke loose, tires shrieking as they drifted through the corner before catching traction on the straightaway. Behind them, both SUVs took the turn hard on their tail.

“Still on us!” Morgan yelled from the floor.

Muzzle flashes strobed in the dark. Bullets hammered the trunk, one tearing a fresh spiderweb across the shattered rear window.

Sarah rolled down her window, leaning out just enough to frame her target against the rushing wind. Crack. Crack. Crack. Three fast rounds tore into the lead SUV’s radiator and hood. The vehicle veered erratically, clipping a curb in a shower of sparks, but kept coming.

“Persistent,” Sarah noted, pulling back inside. 

Chuck dodged through a series of rapid turns—left, right, left—the BMW dancing through the narrow Bahamian streets. But the lead SUV refused to drop back.

“Chuck, they're closing in!” Morgan called out.

Ahead, Chuck spotted a gap between two ancient stucco buildings—a pitch-black gap barely wider than a footbridge.

“There.”

Sarah caught the angle. “Chuck… that's too narrow.”

“For an SUV.” 

Chuck yanked the wheel right at the last possible second. The BMW’s nose cleared the stone corner by millimeters. Metal screeched as the right side scraped plaster, sending a cloud of white dust into the night, but the car squeezed into the gap without losing momentum.

Morgan covered his head. “You could tuck your elbows in!”

Behind them, the lead SUV tried to force its way in. The front bumper made it, but the wide frame didn't. A violent screech of tearing sheet metal echoed through the alley as both side doors crushed against the stone walls, jamming the SUV dead in its tracks and completely blocking the second vehicle behind it.

“They’re wedged!” Morgan cheered, checking the rear glass.

Sarah was already on her satellite phone. “Safe house compromised. Requesting immediate extraction.” She listened for a beat. “Understood. We’re going dark.” 

At the end of the alley, Chuck killed the headlights, took two quick unlit turns, and let the ghosted BMW vanish into the Nassau night. 

XXXXXXXXXXX

The Gulfstream cut quietly through the night sky. Chuck and Sarah sat side by side in their rumpled evening wear, having had no time to change in the rush. A few rows back, Morgan was curled into a ball, snoring softly against an armrest.

Chuck turned the black flash drive over in his fingers, its weight heavy with everything they'd just survived.

Sarah glanced sideways at him. “You know… you owe me.”

Chuck looked up. “For my driving?”

A familiar half-smile touched the corner of her mouth. “A story.”

“Now? Sarah, we just survived an ambush, lost our luggage, and turned a BMW into Swiss cheese—”

“Chuck.” Just one word. 

Chuck sighed, a smile tugging at his lips. “Alright. There was this sandwich girl. Lou…”

Sarah turned in her seat to listen.

“She flirted with me, brought me subs, and then one day she ran into you at the Nerd Herd counter. She asked who you were, and I froze—trying to calculate a believable answer. Coworker, friend, roommate…” Chuck shook his head, a warm laugh escaping him. “And you didn't even hesitate. You stepped right up, held out your hand, and said, ‘His girlfriend.’”

Sarah shrugged mildly. “Technically, that was our cover.”

“Sure. But you said it with enough absolute authority that Lou gave up on the spot. Sarah… It was so convincing I almost believed you.”

Sarah laughed softly. “Did you hate it?”

Chuck met her eyes. “Back then? Terrified me.” He softened. “Now? Best break up of my life.”

The laughter quieted, leaving only the steady hum of the jet engines. Chuck looked back down at the drive, his smile fading. “I’m really sorry about your suitcase.”

Sarah looked at him. “I’ll be okay.”

“I meant the picture.”

Sarah’s expression shifted. Chuck knew what that photograph meant to her—one of the few tangible pieces of her past that could never be replaced. 

Silence stretched between them. Then Sarah gently reached over, sliding her hand over his. Her thumb brushed softly across his knuckles. “You’re here.”

Chuck searched her face as she gave him a faint, reassuring smile. “We’ll make new ones.” 

Chuck squeezed her hand. “Well… since I’m feeling generous.”

Sarah raised an eyebrow.

“Bonus story to make up for the photo. The day you kissed me real for the first time because we thought a bomb was about to blow us to pieces. You kissed me,” he mused. 

Sarah smiled to herself, letting her head rest against Chuck's shoulder. “You were terrified.” 

Chuck chuckled. “Oh, absolutely.”

Far below, the dark expanse of the Atlantic slipped away beneath the clouds, with home waiting somewhere ahead in the west.

XXXXXXXXXXX

══════════════════════════════════════SECURE CHANNEL OPEN══════════════════════════════════════

[OVERSEER]Nassau?

[STORMCLOUD]Failed.

[OVERSEER]Moore?

[STORMCLOUD]Played us.

[OVERSEER]Harrison?

[STORMCLOUD]In our grasps.

[OVERSEER]Bartowski?

[STORMCLOUD]Acquired the data.

[OVERSEER]Unacceptable.

[STORMCLOUD]Requesting authorization for the Omega Protocol.

[OVERSEER]Reason?

[STORMCLOUD]Sentinel and Blackbeard have failed.Bartowski is unpredictable.Walker is back.

[OVERSEER]Operator?

[STORMCLOUD]Silver Fox.

(18 seconds of silence — no connection)

[OVERSEER]Approved.

[STORMCLOUD]Activating Silver Fox.

[OVERSEER]Remind him.

[STORMCLOUD]Of what?

[OVERSEER]He cannot fail.

══════════════════════════════════════CONNECTION TERMINATED══════════════════════════════════════

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6 thoughts on “Chuck versus The Last Wish”

  1. This is rapidly becoming a must read for me. The plot is compelling and fast paced.

    Great chapter. Thanks. Looking forward to reading the next chapter.

  2. Lots of great action. Brings back them working together. .Too bad no Casey on this one. The interaction of Sarah and Chuck continue both fun and light hearted

  3. I swore I would never read another post Finale tale. I hated the Finale. I read many to try to cleanse. Even wrote one of my own. Finally grew weary of it all and swore off trying to fix it.

    Boy, am I glad I broke that rule!! This is a joy. Even tho I can’t keep up with your postings or giving you reviews. It reads well, the flow is smooth, and we are getting so much from C&S as they move forward and grow back together.

    And now a chapter with action and adventure. Bravo!

    This is the kind of writing and storytelling that will keep C&S and Charah alive and well into the future. Bravo and thank you!!

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